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We are near completion on our new short film "Night Scares", but first
wanted to get some reveiws on what you think of it. Let us know if
there are any problems that need to be corrected, and what you like
about it, just an overall review would be great. You can watch the
film below, you will need Windows Media Player.

Watch Night Scares: http://www.filmwave.com/site/video/hiband/ns_dv_01-1.wmv
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    "film_fan_1" <slapper2000@hotmail.com> wrote in message
    news:22798d6a.0404231412.605ed896@posting.google.com...
    > We are near completion on our new short film "Night Scares", but first
    > wanted to get some reveiws on what you think of it. Let us know if
    > there are any problems that need to be corrected, and what you like
    > about it, just an overall review would be great. You can watch the
    > film below, you will need Windows Media Player.
    >
    > Watch Night Scares:
    http://www.filmwave.com/site/video/hiband/ns_dv_01-1.wmv

    OK - I watched it. It was a fun short, but I did have a few problems. The
    biggest issue I had was that you used a number of jump cuts, and you very
    often crossed the line of action without offering any sort of transition
    shot. I don't know if this was intentional or not - a couple of spots, the
    crossing of the line was disconcerting, but I can see how you may have
    wanted it that way. But in the apartment the crosses actually got confusing
    because of how it was put together - especially the close-up of the gun.
    (BTW, I DID like how you covered the lack of a flash by using a tight
    close-up that didn't show the barrel). As a fix, for most of them, not much
    can be done now - it has to be shot without crossing the line. For the
    close-up, though, you can flip the image left/right to get the correct
    direction.

    There were some believability issues as to how the characters acted - but
    for a short like this, I can live with that...

    Just my opinion.
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    Pretty good camera work. As the other reviewer mentioned, there is too much
    of a jump between when the guy walks away from the hitchhiker and when the
    knife is shown, near the beginning.

    --Judd

    "film_fan_1" <slapper2000@hotmail.com> wrote in message
    news:22798d6a.0404231412.605ed896@posting.google.com...
    > We are near completion on our new short film "Night Scares", but first
    > wanted to get some reveiws on what you think of it. Let us know if
    > there are any problems that need to be corrected, and what you like
    > about it, just an overall review would be great. You can watch the
    > film below, you will need Windows Media Player.
    >
    > Watch Night Scares:
    http://www.filmwave.com/site/video/hiband/ns_dv_01-1.wmv
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    It was just OK. Not a real interesting story line, no motive. I found the
    editing choppy. Nice if it was a first effort.
    The dead girl did a good job.

    "film_fan_1" <slapper2000@hotmail.com> wrote in message
    news:22798d6a.0404231412.605ed896@posting.google.com...
    > We are near completion on our new short film "Night Scares", but first
    > wanted to get some reveiws on what you think of it. Let us know if
    > there are any problems that need to be corrected, and what you like
    > about it, just an overall review would be great. You can watch the
    > film below, you will need Windows Media Player.
    >
    > Watch Night Scares:
    http://www.filmwave.com/site/video/hiband/ns_dv_01-1.wmv
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    > We are near completion on our new short film "Night Scares", but first
    > wanted to get some reveiws on what you think of it. Let us know if

    Script needs work... What robber is going to say, "I'm going where
    you're going."? Not real believable that a robber would walk to the
    other side of the car away from the victim when he's only got a knife.

    The main character's reaction to the knock on the door is "over the
    top". He calls 911 based only on a knock at the door, without seeing who
    it is? And when he's got a gun? And how did the robber find him? All a
    bit confusing.

    The actress was very good but the other two were a bit over the top, for
    my tastes anyway. Too dramatic with the facial expressions. The cop was
    pretty good.

    This is a common movie occurrence but no one, and I mean no one, can
    take a couple of 9mm/45 cals to the chest and remain standing. It knocks
    them down like a horse kick. And you don't fall forward after being shot
    from the front. Probably would have been more realistic for the actor to
    have been slammed against the wall and slide down with blood smearing
    the wall.

    I agree with others, the jump cut from the first to the second scene was
    too weird. The photography was very good but the editing was not.
    Headlight shot was cool. The sound recording was very good and the music
    was _outstanding_, great at setting the mood. Fade the music at the very
    end, it just drops off a cliff.

    I'd give it a C- if you've done this before or a B if this is your first
    effort. Remember, criticism is vital to improving your skills. Don't
    take it personally.
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    "Morrmar" <morrmar@myway.com-no spam> wrote in
    news:aU8jc.7036$7a5.6363@bignews6.bellsouth.net:

    >> We are near completion on our new short film "Night Scares", but
    >> first wanted to get some reveiws on what you think of it. Let us
    >> know if
    >
    > Script needs work... What robber is going to say, "I'm going where
    > you're going."? Not real believable that a robber would walk to
    > the other side of the car away from the victim when he's only got
    > a knife.
    >
    > The main character's reaction to the knock on the door is "over
    > the top". He calls 911 based only on a knock at the door, without
    > seeing who it is? And when he's got a gun? And how did the robber
    > find him? All a bit confusing.
    >
    > The actress was very good but the other two were a bit over the
    > top, for my tastes anyway. Too dramatic with the facial
    > expressions. The cop was pretty good.
    >
    > This is a common movie occurrence but no one, and I mean no one,
    > can take a couple of 9mm/45 cals to the chest and remain standing.
    > It knocks them down like a horse kick. And you don't fall forward
    > after being shot from the front. Probably would have been more
    > realistic for the actor to have been slammed against the wall and
    > slide down with blood smearing the wall.
    >
    > I agree with others, the jump cut from the first to the second
    > scene was too weird. The photography was very good but the editing
    > was not. Headlight shot was cool. The sound recording was very
    > good and the music was _outstanding_, great at setting the mood.
    > Fade the music at the very end, it just drops off a cliff.
    >
    > I'd give it a C- if you've done this before or a B if this is your
    > first effort. Remember, criticism is vital to improving your
    > skills. Don't take it personally.
    >
    >
    >

    Although I agree with you about "going where you're going" and about
    the robber finding the man's apartment, I felt it was supposed to be
    more like "Outer Limits" than like a crime stoyr. In fact, I ended
    up not thinking of him as a robber, but as something else - a
    psychopath...

    I was more startled when the cop shot the man who had a noose around
    his neck, since that made him look to me more like a victim than a
    perpetrator.

    I thought it was well filmed and certainly scary enough, but I'm not
    qualified to give it a letter grade :-)

    Gino

    --
    Gene E. Bloch (Gino) phone 650.966.8481
    Call me letters find me at domain blochg whose dot is com
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    > I thought it was well filmed and certainly scary enough, but I'm not
    > qualified to give it a letter grade :-)


    Of course you are! We're all wannabe Siskel or Ebert's... with someone
    else's work. <vbseg>

    The first screenplay I ever wrote received the following criticism,
    "This is unlike any movie that has ever been made, for a reason. Real
    movies aren't this _bad_."
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    "Morrmar" <morrmar@myway.com-no spam> wrote in
    news:PNejc.10479$oN1.5729@bignews5.bellsouth.net:

    >> I thought it was well filmed and certainly scary enough, but I'm
    >> not qualified to give it a letter grade :-)
    >
    >
    > Of course you are! We're all wannabe Siskel or Ebert's... with
    > someone else's work. <vbseg>
    >
    > The first screenplay I ever wrote received the following
    > criticism, "This is unlike any movie that has ever been made, for
    > a reason. Real movies aren't this _bad_."
    >
    >
    >

    LOL

    --
    Gene E. Bloch (Gino) phone 650.966.8481
    Call me letters find me at domain blochg whose dot is com
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