UPDATE: More wonderful mistakes found.
Here is a small portion of the newest THWG headliner article ("The X1900 launch mania: Are you sold?"), with mistakes in bold (my notes in braces):
"...ATI has been very much aware of this, {needs conjunction or rw}their apprehension about a backlash from the media heightened by the fact that they know Nvidia has been quick to capitalise on the lack of actual Crossfire cards whilst{I'll forgive this as geekspeak} their SLI cards have become almost commonplace.
This time they have put units in the hands of retailers as well as journalists. So sceptical of "major product launches" we are{Yoda speaking? HMMM...skeptical of product launches we are, yes, MMM!} that Newegg.com sent Darren a picture from inside their warehouse showing open boxes {needs "which are" or "that are", or rw}filled with X1900's{no quotation mark needed, the X1900s do not own anything here}.
Thos doesn't mean however that panic buying{WTF is this?} won't ensue and {needs "that"}our news guru{commas?} Wolfgang Gruener reported that cards have been fetching upwards of $700 - between $50 and $100 above what you'd otherwise expect to pay. {anyone else able to read that sentence? OMG!}
Never the less the general consensus from the technology media is that ATI has pulled off a hard launch. It's perhaps shocking to those who do not follow the technology industry that we're devoting several paragraphs to seeing whether or not the product will be on shelves after launch, but welcome to the nut house{nuthouse}. {bad order of clauses, maybe write as "To those who do not follow the technology industry, it is perhaps shocking... "}
Anybody else as disappointed in THW as I am? This is inexcuseable! Haven't read the whole thing yet but my goodness!
Here is a small portion of the newest THWG headliner article ("The X1900 launch mania: Are you sold?"), with mistakes in bold (my notes in braces):
"...ATI has been very much aware of this, {needs conjunction or rw}their apprehension about a backlash from the media heightened by the fact that they know Nvidia has been quick to capitalise on the lack of actual Crossfire cards whilst{I'll forgive this as geekspeak} their SLI cards have become almost commonplace.
This time they have put units in the hands of retailers as well as journalists. So sceptical of "major product launches" we are{Yoda speaking? HMMM...skeptical of product launches we are, yes, MMM!} that Newegg.com sent Darren a picture from inside their warehouse showing open boxes {needs "which are" or "that are", or rw}filled with X1900's{no quotation mark needed, the X1900s do not own anything here}.
Thos doesn't mean however that panic buying{WTF is this?} won't ensue and {needs "that"}our news guru{commas?} Wolfgang Gruener reported that cards have been fetching upwards of $700 - between $50 and $100 above what you'd otherwise expect to pay. {anyone else able to read that sentence? OMG!}
Never the less the general consensus from the technology media is that ATI has pulled off a hard launch. It's perhaps shocking to those who do not follow the technology industry that we're devoting several paragraphs to seeing whether or not the product will be on shelves after launch, but welcome to the nut house{nuthouse}. {bad order of clauses, maybe write as "To those who do not follow the technology industry, it is perhaps shocking... "}
Anybody else as disappointed in THW as I am? This is inexcuseable! Haven't read the whole thing yet but my goodness!