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Hey guys
Actually – it’s two songs – both very much demos – first one is foos/pearl jam-ish - it needs more electric guitar, but my guitar neck is cracked. Your comments on the structure, instrument arrangement, and the song itself would be very helpful. 2nd tune isn’t quite how I want the production to go, but haven’t the skills to get the right sound – it’s called ‘Till Your World’s In Line With Mine’, and is my fav song I have written
They're tracks 1 and 2
on my player at http://people.aapt.net.au/celebrit [...] smith.html - it's a streaming player, so no need to wait for a download.
Cheers
Tommy T
Again, more sh*tty music. Nice job on the voice effects for slippin' agay. It took 10sec instead of 5sec to realize you can't sing for sh*t.
+5 Comedy +15 Belated Holy Points +5 Messianic Approval + 5 penile innovation
+13 Baked Ham creativity +65 Obscure Quote
Reply to KingLoftusXII
Cheers bro. Did you want your copy on CD or as an mp3?
Not bad, I even got a whole album name for you, "Cuming Out" [*sexual j/k*]
Message edited by Assman on 12-18-2007 at 05:13:32 AM
Reply to Assman
AKFLFLD
"Lonely once the drugs are gone, I feel like..."
Roll Tide! Reply to mrface
...*hacks Stinky Smith's webpage and replaces tracks of questionable quality with a selection from Cradle Of Filth*...
shapeless and faceless - Yet I have a name,
I shall tighten my grip on your now flawed creation,
endeavour to show you the meaning of pain.'
Reply to RobD
They're nearly as good as the highly fashionable Tenpole Tudor.
* strikes Smith *
You know what, this is fun!
* strikes him again *
Reply to llama_man
*Punches Striking Smith in the face*
*Grabs llama suit*
Wingy, come get some.
Comes close to the highly masculine Culture Club too.
shapeless and faceless - Yet I have a name,
I shall tighten my grip on your now flawed creation,
endeavour to show you the meaning of pain.'
Reply to RobD
Who are not a patch on the topical and relevant Blancmange.
Who are not even fit to lick the cool and hip Fun Boy Three's boots.
shapeless and faceless - Yet I have a name,
I shall tighten my grip on your now flawed creation,
endeavour to show you the meaning of pain.'
Reply to RobD
Foreign music is better than that.
Bet he doesn't even understand what we're saying about him.
Then he's unlikely to appreciate the dark tones of Bauhaus.
* Reaches for Kraftwerk CD *
Reply to llama_man
I'm suspecting then that the work of Falco will be unappreciated.
shapeless and faceless - Yet I have a name,
I shall tighten my grip on your now flawed creation,
endeavour to show you the meaning of pain.'
Reply to RobD
No doubt. As would the less than subtle efforts of Noddy Holder and the boys.
He's suited to playing with himself in a dark corner.
You've just described 90% of the people who come here.
I know...I should stop looking in the mirror while I type.
*goes to dark corner and fumble*
Thanks for the good times guys. My song 'Starry Eyes' has just gone from 47 to 13 on the Triple J Radio Station Unearthed competition pop charts - you can listen to and download it at http://www.triplejunearthed.com/strikingsmith
If it's not your cup of tea, there are tons of talented bands there - start with the charts: http://www.triplejunearthed.com/Ch [...] ?genre=Pop
Wait, I thought we were voting for the worst song?
Reply to Riser
Again, my theory stands that he can't understand a thing we're saying to him...
He's a fcuk wit.
Cheers Baz - you're a winner - a little slow, but a winner
Merry Christmas mate!
Find a day job.
Reply to Riser
Or a hand job.
There's that family wh0re in you coming out..
Reply to Riser
I'm coming out, but not in a wh0re way.
It's night time here. I earn a crust from singing, so no day job required. Hand jobs are boring. Blowies from your girlfriend are much more fun. But you guys would know that already.
His girlfriend is his mum. She's toothless though. You know, always improve on your best skills. Her pimp slapped those things out.
You see those commercials where that Dyson guy is talking about his vacuums? Yeah, she was one of his 5,000 prototypes to get it right.
Reply to Riser
Christ I think his mum took crack. No one can be that fcuking retarded.
Look at your mum. Trace your origins.. erm, half of them at least.
Reply to Riser
*looks at mum*
*Hi mum*
And your point is what?
Illiterate twat you are. Following in mum's footsteps you are.
Reply to Riser
| Striking Smith wrote : Blowies from your girlfriend/wife are much more fun. But you guys would know that already. |
You've not met Wingy, have you?
Reply to llama_man
ahhh! so he an aussie! heheheh
"Lonely once the drugs are gone, I feel like..."
Roll Tide! Reply to mrface
Bloody convicts.
shapeless and faceless - Yet I have a name,
I shall tighten my grip on your now flawed creation,
endeavour to show you the meaning of pain.'
Reply to RobD
Stupid Yanks!
No longer will I follow.
Can anybody hear me?
I just want to be me.
Reply to JustPlainJef
"Blowies from your girlfriend are much more fun. But you guys would know that already."
Yes, there are many here who've had a gobble from that tart of yours.
We like to call her Turkey!
No longer will I follow.
Can anybody hear me?
I just want to be me.
Reply to JustPlainJef
Not my tart - I said your girlfriend - I think blowies with your girlfriend are much more fun. She's not the best I've had, but you should be proud.
That's assuming he has a GF.
You are being too nice SS.
I will listen to your stuff, maybe, when I get home and have had a few. I am sure they will sound better when I can't tell the diffrence between your vocals and the cats outside shagging each other.
On second thought, I probably don't need the booze for that......
Reply to Ninjahedge
He's still a fcuk wit.
Lets club him to death with a frozen cow leg.
Call me crazy, but he seems to be trying to fit in down here.
I don't know why anyone would want to hang out with us, but that's what it looks like to me.
Now be gone before I taunt you a second time!
No longer will I follow.
Can anybody hear me?
I just want to be me.
Reply to JustPlainJef
Again...We should beat him...It's alright, it's therapy. Ask wingy.
'Lets club him to death with a frozen cow leg.'
Dirty Baz loves his hand on the beef.
| Dirty_Barry wrote : Again...We should beat him...It's alright, it's therapy. Ask wingy. |
Therapy is for sissys.
I prefer electro-shock therapy. Without sedation! 
Boobs Boobs Boobs...who loves boobs?...I do I do Reply to zpyrd
@ Stroking smith
Yes I do love the beef...Got a problem with that homeless veggie.
@zpyrd
If we're going down that road then slowly skin him. Cut small pieces off his body till he looks like he's played too much operation.
Message edited by Dirty_Barry on 12-20-2007 at 12:36:44 PM
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No more promise no more sorrow,
No longer will I follow.
Can anybody hear me?
I just want to be me.
Reply to JustPlainJef
No longer will I follow.
Can anybody hear me?
I just want to be me.
Reply to JustPlainJef
Pedant.
Reply to llama_man
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